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Fanfiction help
« on: January 04, 2013, 12:05:36 am »
Ok, so I've decided to take up writing fanfiction. I've been having some trouble because as I'm writing it I keep on having trouble with what look will look best where. I've decided to just write down what comes to me and when I'm finished decide where it goes. Also is there anyone here who would like to help me proof-read it, when I'm finished?? Thanks for your time.
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Re: Fanfiction help
« Reply #1 on: January 04, 2013, 02:51:30 pm »
What's it about?

I'm trying to do the same, though work is hectic lately.   
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Re: Fanfiction help
« Reply #2 on: January 04, 2013, 03:24:55 pm »
*cough* Palaptine/Padme shipping *cough*
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Re: Fanfiction help
« Reply #3 on: January 04, 2013, 04:21:50 pm »
For some reason, I'm not surprised in the least.
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Re: Fanfiction help
« Reply #4 on: January 05, 2013, 02:27:02 am »
When does it take place? Preferably before Padme dies.
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Re: Fanfiction help
« Reply #5 on: January 05, 2013, 08:17:41 am »
It would certainly explain why Vader threw him down that big fuckoff shaft thingy in Return of the Jedi.

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Re: Fanfiction help
« Reply #6 on: January 05, 2013, 10:55:28 am »
When does it take place? Preferably before Padme dies.

I'm setting the story in 26BBY, during her last year as Queen.

It would certainly explain why Vader threw him down that big fuckoff shaft thingy in Return of the Jedi.

Is wrong that I like to think of that as one of the reasons?? "WTF?? You screwed my wife?? Fuck You!!" lol

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Re: Fanfiction help
« Reply #7 on: January 06, 2013, 02:44:57 pm »
I'd love to help with the proofreading, but work is so crazy, I'm having a hard time concentrating on much, including a SW story of my own.
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Re: Fanfiction help
« Reply #8 on: January 06, 2013, 04:28:14 pm »
cool, I don't know when I'll be done with it, probably around the end of the month.

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Re: Fanfiction help
« Reply #9 on: January 06, 2013, 04:58:32 pm »
I'm hoping to have the first one done by the end of the week.  I have no cluse about the rest.  I started with an idea for a simple story and ended up planning for a series (Basically Eps 7-9).  Not sure how far I'll get.
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Re: Fanfiction help
« Reply #10 on: January 06, 2013, 05:50:02 pm »
I'm thinking of doing series of short stories too. We'll see. It's time of year where my hours really get cut down, so I'll have the time to write.

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Re: Fanfiction help
« Reply #11 on: January 22, 2013, 10:54:28 am »
I fear I am not well-versed in the lore of Star Wars, but if it's not too long, I'd be happy to help you proof-read, Empress Nicki! Plus, that sounds like an awesomely creepy pairing.
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Re: Fanfiction help
« Reply #12 on: January 22, 2013, 10:58:16 am »
When does it take place? Preferably before Padme dies.

I'm setting the story in 26BBY, during her last year as Queen.

It would certainly explain why Vader threw him down that big fuckoff shaft thingy in Return of the Jedi.

Is wrong that I like to think of that as one of the reasons?? "WTF?? You screwed my wife?? Fuck You!!" lol

How old would she be then? I know she was supposed to be 14 in Episode I.
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Re: Fanfiction help
« Reply #13 on: March 01, 2013, 09:35:00 pm »
Sorry, I haven't done this sooner. Ok, I haven't worked on the fanfiction in awhile, but instead I ended up starting another one. Another Palpatine one, but this one takes place when he's Ambassador of Naboo.
 Also @ R.U., Padme is like 20 in the fanfic, I'm writing, so...