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Offline Jacob Harrison

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Re: Something very important that you and Niam should know
« Reply #15 on: August 11, 2018, 05:23:16 pm »
Chapter 9 and 10 are coming out tonight.

I've revealed little enough about King Michael that I don't blame Jacob for assuming something needs to be altered.

And to basically say what is going on with these stories - I intend for there to be a bit of contrast between my offerings and what Jacob is typing out. So more or less - I'm mocking him by writing his own universe better than he does.

There is one reference to King Jaime in chapter 3

“This would not be what Jaime would have done, Gabriel tried to tell himself.”

So you will have to replace the word Jaime with Pierre.
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Re: Something very important that you and Niam should know
« Reply #16 on: August 11, 2018, 10:07:46 pm »
No he won't, it trolls you just fine either way.
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Re: Something very important that you and Niam should know
« Reply #17 on: August 11, 2018, 11:42:01 pm »
So that's, what, the fifth "true heir" you've dug up thus far? I guess we can expect a new one sometime in the next fortnight or so.

This time I’m sure I found the right one.

Of course you are.

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Re: Something very important that you and Niam should know
« Reply #18 on: August 12, 2018, 12:02:48 am »
And of course he still hasn't gotten the point that the "right one" is the current Queen, since she is the rightful heir of Sophia of Hanover via male-preference primogeniture, as per the Act of Settlement passed by the representatives of the people in Parliament.
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Re: Something very important that you and Niam should know
« Reply #19 on: August 12, 2018, 01:41:03 am »
He changes who the true heir is ore than most people change their socks.

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Re: Something very important that you and Niam should know
« Reply #20 on: August 12, 2018, 01:41:46 am »
...I am reasonably sure the next one will be East European somehow.

Also, isn't Excalibur's Return entirely based on the idea of Jaime being King? There are multiple references to him in it.

And the whole conceit of it is Jacob's experience of a vision of a parallel universe where JAIME is the King. So unless the parallel universe he supposedly speaks of changes its legitimate new king whenever Jacob finds a new totally legit heir...

Ergo I think the current version will do just fine.

Also, gonna have to put off chapter 9 and 10 until tomorrow - got to head to bed early for an appointment tomorrow. But I do have a teaser for Chapter 10.

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Re: Something very important that you and Niam should know
« Reply #21 on: August 12, 2018, 02:21:19 am »
So that's, what, the fifth "true heir" you've dug up thus far? I guess we can expect a new one sometime in the next fortnight or so.
It almost makes me feel sorry for the toffs, the poor bastards keep getting harangued by a weird little bastard called Jacob Harrison!

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Re: Something very important that you and Niam should know
« Reply #22 on: August 12, 2018, 07:32:55 am »
...I am reasonably sure the next one will be East European somehow.

Also, isn't Excalibur's Return entirely based on the idea of Jaime being King? There are multiple references to him in it.

And the whole conceit of it is Jacob's experience of a vision of a parallel universe where JAIME is the King. So unless the parallel universe he supposedly speaks of changes its legitimate new king whenever Jacob finds a new totally legit heir...

Ergo I think the current version will do just fine.

Also, gonna have to put off chapter 9 and 10 until tomorrow - got to head to bed early for an appointment tomorrow. But I do have a teaser for Chapter 10.

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So maybe you should add a chapter where I discover who the true rightful heir is and replace King Michael with the son of Pierre Naquet. After Michael’s death, the new King marries Iva. Since I am sure I found the true heir, the story should be based on who I consider the legitimate heir.
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