Right. Also, I'm half considering, now that I'm up to a point...
...I'm half considering making Pinkie's father homophobic. Like, they're spending the morning after breakfast together, waiting for the train back to Ponyville to arrive, and Pinkie's still a bit unsure about things. She wants to know how Rarity thinks the rest of their friends will react, and deep inside she's feeling slightly guilty about her feelings for Rarity as she [possibly] had a dream about her father disowning her for it. I mean, I haven't even written a dream out, but maybe I could script one in here, or at least a bit where Pinkie talks about her dream and about her dad.
Edit: I did go briefly into the subject, but I didn't dwell on it. I'm about to write the very last part where they get onto the train and go back to Ponyville. I probably will skip most if not all of the train trip and will have them meeting their friends again, who will understandably be a bit relieved to see their friends back safe and sound.
Well, I have it at 2436. I know the minimum is "2500 words," but that's pretty damned close. I mean, I'm sure it'll need some refining maybe here and there, and some words may be cut out and some added to make it flow better beyond other corrections. What do you think? Should I send it off to the fires of editors?
Update: I've submitted it to an editor from my state's brony group.