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A WIP Song
« on: March 19, 2013, 08:54:37 pm »
So I was thinking of making a song, and I have some lyrics to start off the venture.

Quote from: My song so far
You're a Republican, and I'm a Democrat.
We have or spats, but we see our system's crap.
Labels divide us, so we do not see.
We are not each others' enemy.

I could see that right there being a refrain line.  Thoughts?  Comments?  Suggestions on how to flesh this out more?  Hell, we might even be able to collaborate on producing music to go with this.
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Re: A WIP Song
« Reply #1 on: March 20, 2013, 09:34:26 pm »
I think your song has potential, but I really think you need to hash out a few more lines to really allow us to get a feel for it. If you can get back to me with a chorus, or a few more verses, then I, and I'm sure others, could really begin refining your work.

I don't know what kind of song you're going for, but I play guitar and if the full song inspires me, I may put something together.